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Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Persuasive Writting

   A lot of kids my age think there is nothing wrong with drinking and driving, but I am highly against it. Driving while intoxicated is very dangerous. You can't see clearly, and your reflexes arn't as quick. How would you feel if you killed someone while driving because you were drunk. I would feel terrible, and it would haunt me forever. Over 1 in 7 deaths caused by driving, are from drunk drivers. why drinking and driving is bad.   So stay safe, choose to drink or choose to drive, but don't choose both.               

Is this what you would expect to happen? No one expects it... It just happens.                                                                                                                                                           

1 comment:

  1. This is a good start! Great video clips and link!
    Here are hints on the spelling stuff: writing; aren't; change a . to a ?; make your link into a complete sentence. Then keep going! You're doing great so far!

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